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Lust in the blackness:

As here I sit alone in the dark,
Waiting for him in this lonely park,
I hear a voice from out of the night,
I sit stiil and shake with fright.
Then that voice starts to draw near,
And slowly melts away my fear,
Then it begings to touch me and I moan,
The lust in the blackness is now over grown.
The voice comes closer as I get hotter,
Much to my amazement its like I'm in hot water,
His hands finally touch my burning hot skin,
And I know that the lust from outside is now within.
He continues to melt me with his every word,
Not to listen to him would be absurd,
Then his voice places hot kisses on the flesh of my neck,
No not a small little kiss, no not a tiny peck.
But a kiss that would make any woman cream her jeans,
And want more than that plus a bowl of ice creams,
To feel his breath on my naked flesh would be so sweet,
Wrapped in his arms off his body strawberries I would eat.
The lust in the darkness that grows between us two,
Comes from a lust thats long awaited and yet so true,
The lust between us grows more stronger by the day,
And I hope one day it will be here in love to stay.
His voice makes me touch myself and feel things,
That I have never felt before not even in my wildest dreams,
Feelings so erotic and so intense,
Feelings that will never end in a certain sence.
Only a true TON fan can know what I feel,
For they too have felt it so its real,
But I personally wanna sink my nails into Peter Steele,
And I'll show him what lust can be and feel.