"Oh, why don't you fall through a hole in the floor!" she glared at him icily, unafraid.<br>At that moment, the floorboards began to creak and soon gave ...
When everyone had made it back to the 'Cage', they were all extremely tired. Murdoc threw himself down in his chair and stretched noisily. Noodle rubbed her...
For me as a wrighter, I have to admit this is a great piece of work. I could actually see this as a cartoon but still, I do not own an animation company. I ...
He gets mentioned later, but he really doesn't do that much. Well, there is this one part, but we'll get to that a little later. Glad you are enjoying this, ...
Noodle woke up, sweat dripping from her face. Her first instinct was to run to 2D for comfort, but she needed to make sure she was only dreaming. Wailing, she ...
Ambrosia sleepily walked into the kitchen, her stomach growling wildly. It was raining outside and rain always seemed to make her very hungry.<br>"Morning," 2D...
Ambrosia took a deep breath as she stood in front of Club Tangent. She had to get her old life back and this was the only way. As she opened the front door,...
Chapter 7<br><br>"Murdoc!" Ambrosia exclaimed as he jumped on top of Mr. Kijino and they began to fight each other.<br>"Come on, Noodle; let's get outta here,"...
2D was waiting on them as they pulled in. As soon as Ambrosia got out of the car, however, her legs gave way and she fell on top of 2D, sobbing.<br>"Huh?" 2D...
"Mmmm, that's good; oh right there....yeah," 2D groaned happily as Noodle stood on his bed, massaging his aching temples. Closing her eyes, Noodle imagined...
I like the story but there are some things missing in some characters. Heres some things I would ask for you to take in consideration of your characters. ...
Murdoc's satanism shows up a bit later in the story, Noodle is too busy worrying about me, uh, I mean, Ambrosia at the moment (but in my next book which I am ...
"MY fault? How do you figure that?" Ambrosia cried, hands on her hips.<br>"Ever since you came here, she's been acting all weird and stuff. Now she's turned to...
Chapter 9<br><br>"Ladies and gentlemen, welcome to the 'Bump N Grind' Dance Competition!" the emcee shouted to the crowd. "Grab a partner or dance by yourself,...
"You have to," the emcee hissed. "It's bloody tradition! Now kiss each other."<br>Ambrosia looked at Murdoc and gagged. There was no way her perfect lips were...
"You sleepy?" Russel asked her as they walked into the kitchen.<br>"A little, maybe. Are you?"<br>"Del is making me tired. He's rapping in my head and it's...
Chapter 10<br><br>"Aaaah!" Noodle cried, sitting up in bed. Her stuffed animals had been tossed on the floor from her fitful sleep and her heart was racing....
Noodle opened her eyes and saw that Murdoc, 2D, and Russel were lying in a pile only a few inches from her. Standing up, she ran to them and awoke them, ...
Chapter 11<br><br>Russel ran down the hallway, searching every nook, cranny, and doorway for Ambrosia. "Don't fret, Noodle. We'll find her. I can feel it," he ...
Chapter 12<br><br>Murdoc felt as if he had been falling forever. Suddenly, he felt himself smash right into something metallic and he winced in pain. <br>"Ow,"...
2D stumbled down the hallway, hoping to find someone he knew. He had a very bad headache and was becoming quite nauseated. He had to get help before that thing...
It did. I hope everyone likes my club pic...I may be changing it soon, but I'm looking for an even better one (one that has all 4 members, and a clear and ...
Chapter 13<br><br>Murdoc watched as Ambrosia paced back and forth across the room, trying desparately to think of a way out. The only thing she was doing,...
Hey, I haven't posted in the past few days because my server has been down and I couldn't even go to Yahoo without it kicking me off :-(<br>I'm back now, ...
Chapter 14<br><br>Russel had never felt more helpless in his life as he stood frozen to the wall, watching as Noodle was being pulled away by some invisible ...