Thanks Sam, I've got acoustic guitar music to it. That's about her.. I'll check your site out later..Cool. It will be a good discussion.. Best wishes>..Mouse.....
This is an amazing lyric. I have something that has the same vibe, but I'm a pop singer and the way the music industry is going ( for pop)... whatever is not...
This system helps songwriters pin down the verbal messages that are actually in the music itself. http://groups.yahoo.com/group/Verbaltheory/ The sample music...
I do SoundClick as well (http://www.soundclick.com/bands/5/ thespacemicemusic.htm). I have some stuff on IUMA as well, but it's way outdated. IUMA hasn't given...
Very, very nice. Maybe I've grown dense from watching too many sit coms or something, but I didn't see the ending coming. I kept thinking, "But *who* are these...
I like the chorus. There's a richness in meaning in "trying to get closer or further away." I get where you're going in the verses, but they're not as exciting...
well, thanks I have been writing a long time but find that it is hard to get valid criticism, at least from non-writers who are too easily impressed, so it is...
Chance of a kiss To where can I send my regrets, pretty dancer that I cannot again waltz tonight with you? how that smile must light dark hours, how those eyes...
... From: Rhonda La Don Sent: Thursday, April 01, 2004 4:06 AM To: songwritersandpoets@yahoogroups.com Subject: [songwriters and poets] First Post (Nothing...
hey guys, My name is Angela Fenyvesi, 28 from Canada. I recently got my poem/song book published named Beautifully Broken Into a sacrifice of a lifetime...
Hi, I'm a newbie to this board and write metal and hard rock songs. My lyrics tend to be on the darker side. I wanted to post some for feedback but was worried...
hi my name is jay if any on needs drum tracks please email me at The_Drummers_Relm@... or www.freewebs.com/drumtracks __________________________________ ...
hello, i'm just looking for some critiques on the music i write. my website is www.geocities.com/dankennedymusic feel free to check it out and get back to me...
Beyond The Inside Johnny go down The water rush over Father hold hand And Mother smile loud Johnny don't understand Just know it's the answer Never had a...
Hi group Just put some finishing touches to my new web site with RA sounclips. If anybody is really bored, I'd be very grateful for some feedback. The site...
my latest poem to share with everybody: Little Women http://poetry-today.com/poemView.aspx?poemId=9778§ionId=Children __________________________________ Do...
We'll here's one of my lyrics to critique. They are from a metal song I wrote and are a tad on the dark side. I'd be interested in any response, but especially...
Hey a tad on the darkside? I am a normally glum sort, you make me sound like Smilin' Bob it's medieval I hear this out of a Marshall double stack & about...
If i could find some free hosting I'd put up a link to the studio version. Other than how dark it was, what did you think ? And what do you think it's about ? ...
non-aaron chubby flip-flop broken plastic beanie-baby babble spastic aaron bumble up the walk he mumble when he try to talk they jump him like a trampoline he...
Quite lovely. The use of repetition, and the subtle alterations of those repetitions, works wonderfullly. I especially like "...four children began crying...
Are you a songwriter who is looking for a female vocalist to sing one or more of your songs? If so contact Joe at joeboxerboy66@... He is in contact with...
Guaranteed publishing deals are among the prizes in this year's UK Songwriting Contest. Entries from all countries – not just the UK – are always welcome...
This is one where meaning is subservient to vibe. You could be thinking it's about the devil or about humanity or about some Greek myth, but all the listener...
Now, this one is *truly* dark and creepy. I haven't decided whether I'm impressed or disgusted. I suppose I can be both. You're not secretly Dante, are you?* ...
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