Hi group, Here's my latest... It's still needs work because it doesn't flow as well as I'd like, so give any pointers you wish. ONE FOOT IN THE WORLD copr....
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Lorenz
eliezerwolf27
Apr 4, 2009 4:27 pm
Gwen- There seems to be too much rhyming for rhyme's sake (ie. it sounds like you are only choosing a word because of how it sounds/rhymes than actually saying...
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Tom Solanto
onenoteup
Apr 5, 2009 11:09 am
Hi guys, LOL I am tryin my hand at some country lyrics. Not really my strong suite but make for good practice. I might put this to music if you guys think it...
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shanemurfy
Apr 8, 2009 4:42 pm
Hi everybody, I was wondering whether people on this list had any interesting stories about things they have done with their songwriting over and above just...
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Japin Scales
scales.japin
Apr 8, 2009 4:43 pm
I like it. ... From: shanemurfy <shanemurfy@...> Subject: [writing-songs] Re: Just wrote this new song (Unlove Me). Would appreciate comments. To:...
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scales.japin
Apr 8, 2009 4:44 pm
Your On Your Own verse 1: My baby's acting weird to me, disappearing everytime her phone it rings. She's sneaking out of bed when she thinks I'm sleep, to the...
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Joseph Reyes
jreyes1488
Apr 8, 2009 4:44 pm
this song is hot.i made it Verse 1 we are often. almost always fighting since the beging of our time people cry other people dying because other people...
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scales.japin
Apr 8, 2009 4:45 pm
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rockstartob
Apr 8, 2009 4:45 pm
hey um i just wrote this its fairly rough so tell me what you think so far (i was thinking of calling it living dead) i want to give up it just won't work i...
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penny lapsley
littleangel4u36
Apr 8, 2009 6:01 pm
awesome job it show your emotions in life. did a friend leave you or something? because i can understand this one pretty good ... From: rockstartob...
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Joseph Reyes
jreyes1488
Apr 8, 2009 7:21 pm
na it was just on my mind but thank you thou ________________________________ From: penny lapsley <littleangel4u36@...> To:...
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Matthew Sykes
songwriter.matt
Apr 9, 2009 11:38 am
This is a really long shot, I realise but............ Are there any keyboard players on this group who live in Kent, UK who can sing and write songs who want...
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msykes71
Apr 14, 2009 12:55 am
SORRY - could you send your replies to this email address. Thank you!!! This is a really long shot, I realise but............ Are there any keyboard players...
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billiefsmith
Apr 14, 2009 12:56 am
I am writing the words to a country song and I am looking for someone to do the tune....
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IamDave
proaudiomusic
Apr 15, 2009 8:46 pm
You might post the lyrics. As a writer who sometimes does that I get inspiration from a lyric. If I don't feel a lyric I'd rather not write the music....
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Keith Hale
iwordsmithy
Apr 17, 2009 1:40 pm
So are several million other people, myself included !...
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Japin Scales
scales.japin
Apr 17, 2009 1:40 pm
... From: scales.japin <scales.japin@...> Subject: [writing-songs] new song To: writing-songs@yahoogroups.com Date: Friday, March 27, 2009, 9:57 PM Your...
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BILLIE SMITH
billiefsmith
Apr 19, 2009 2:51 am
in her sleep while she's creeping round in her dreams. Nice lyrics but shouldn't the above line be he's creepingin her dreams? Have a GREAT day !! Billie ... ...
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IamDave
proaudiomusic
Apr 22, 2009 5:16 pm
Has anyone used tunecore to put your songs on itunes etc.? I sent in mine and was wondering any feedback from those who've used them. Thanks, Dave Byers ...
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taylorparade
Apr 28, 2009 5:06 pm
... i have posted a song on itunes. i used the tunecore program. what do you need to know about it?...
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taylorparade
Apr 28, 2009 5:06 pm
... is this a country song?...
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taylorparade
Apr 28, 2009 5:06 pm
hey everyone im new to this group. i was wondering if any one had any suggestions on song writing books. thanks...
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taylorparade
Apr 28, 2009 5:07 pm
the dna part reminds me of being in my science class....
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taylorparade
Apr 28, 2009 5:07 pm
holy cow!!!! this is beautiful!...
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Clare Higgins
clarehhiggins
Apr 28, 2009 5:14 pm
Hi, everybody. This may be a little off-topic; if so please pardon me. I need advice in choosing an already-famous song for a slide-show I'm doing. This slide...
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IamDave
proaudiomusic
Apr 28, 2009 5:16 pm
Having any success? Dave Byers www.writingsongs.com/davebyers www.soundclick.com/davebyers www.christiansongwriting.org www.writingsongs.com ...
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IamDave
proaudiomusic
Apr 28, 2009 5:28 pm
Here is a link to a bunch of them: http://www.dcmusicstore.com/Books-Videos-DVDs/Songwriting My fav's: Songwriting Fundamentals - of course ;-) Craft of lyric...
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IamDave
proaudiomusic
May 1, 2009 6:19 pm
- What's the last song you wrote? - What style of music is it? - What do you like about it? - How long ago was that? - Why dd you write it? - Is it different...
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Kevin Bradley
writemyday
May 2, 2009 3:13 am
It has been a while sence i have posted a lyric,it does not mean i have stoped writing it just means I have stoped typing. This lyric is different from my...
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Kevin Bradley
writemyday
May 2, 2009 3:49 am
I like the honesty in your lyrics. This advice is coming from some one who is not in the business. Nor do i claim to have any knowledge of song writing.Your...
